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darkshine

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July 29 2010 10:48 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Hey everyone,

Just put a new cover of "The Diary of Jane" by Breaking Benjamin on YouTube.

Just looking for some feedback

It was done in one take as well, without much practice, so I was a bit pitchy in some areas. Piano was recorded later on.

click here for link

Equipment used:
Audio Technica AT4040
Studio Projects B1
Presonus Firepod
Logic Studio 8
Fender Acoustic
Yamaha Upright Piano

Any tips or feedback is welcome either here or on the YouTube video.

Thanks in advanced guys!
Daniel.
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July 29 2010 10:49 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Stop covering music.
darkshine
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July 29 2010 10:50 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
I only do it for a bit of fun.
I'm currently working on originals as well.
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July 29 2010 10:51 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Dont do that either.
darkshine
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July 29 2010 10:53 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Hahaha cheers man.
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July 30 2010 1:05 AM   QuickQuote Quote  
You have the potential to be a good vocalist but im honest so I'll be the one to say it needs a little bit of work yet.

Its an interesting version of the song, almost wanna say I like the subdued feel and acoustic/piano sound better than the original.
darkshine
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July 31 2010 2:21 AM   QuickQuote Quote  
Originally posted by: DarkHorseDeviant

You have the potential to be a good vocalist but im honest so I'll be the one to say it needs a little bit of work yet.

Its an interesting version of the song, almost wanna say I like the subdued feel and acoustic/piano sound better than the original.



Thanks for the feedback :)

Yeah I definitely need to work on some of my projection and pitch, up until the 2nd chorus anyway, because the first one was definitely scratchy.

Yeah it works just as good acoustic than it does heavy. Cheers.
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July 31 2010 11:12 AM   QuickQuote Quote  
breaking benjamin is so terrible
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July 31 2010 5:22 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
you said it brickhouse. my buddy brian was talking about how he liked the new album. I wanted to hit him with the pool cue i was holding.
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August 2 2010 4:16 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Originally posted by: NBK

you said it brickhouse. my buddy brian was talking about how he liked the new album. I wanted to hit him with the pool cue i was holding.



How dare he
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August 3 2010 3:13 AM   QuickQuote Quote  
I hate breaking benjamin. Sorry if you like them, and I should not bash your thread, but... I felt I should throw my two cents in.
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