poem [[needs alot of work]] 2 replies, 8451 views

11/25/2005 11:19:00 PM
doc holliday
11/26/2005 5:58:00 PM
well, its not very good at all.

probably because you wrote it in the 11 grade. and few writers can write anything worth mentioning at that age. so, scratch it, and start over entirely.

Eric Paradox
11/26/2005 9:24:00 PM
you know, before coming to this site I didn't realize that poems could actually make you gag.