Song needs critique (help a negro out) 1 replies, 23494 views

3/21/2012 4:07:00 AM
This turned into mpeg static quick on soundcloud's player, but I need opinions & suggestions here on how I can make this better. It's for a competition, and I'm very aware that it's not metal

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3/21/2012 6:00:00 AM
No one clicks a soundcloud link, ever

cover is gay, is not the point